I fixed a couple grammatical errors that Andy King emailed me and

Author: mako
Date: 2001/04/06 04:52:57
I fixed a couple grammatical errors that Andy King emailed me and
started myself off on the road to v0.2 which I am going to try and
release in the next couple of days if I can. :) Ugh.

Anyway. Andy also suggested that I add a paragraph about using version
control systems with a couple ideas of CVS equiavalents on Windoze as
well as CVS which I use. I will try to incrorporate that into the next
version. I also have a whole back of links from advogato that I've
been reading through and getting highlights from. I am will spend a
good check of tomorrow trying to synthesize that stuff all in before I
have a big ol' proof reading party with a couple friends and try to
get a relatively error free version v0.2 out before tomorrow night. :)

I may try to have another error fixes but one goal is to have a stable
version out by Tuesday for a final meeting. I will get comments there
that might push me towards a version that I will try and submit to
advogato first and then maybe LDP as a real HOWTO. :)

diff --git a/FreeSoftwareDevelopmentHOWTO.sgml b/FreeSoftwareDevelopmentHOWTO.sgml
index 74401a8f0f4dc0cc058b1e47cca123f70214a2cc..407322c2d92f0bbf515f6df7a17d2c3985f922e3 100644 (file)
--- a/FreeSoftwareDevelopmentHOWTO.sgml
+++ b/FreeSoftwareDevelopmentHOWTO.sgml
@@ -1380,8 +1380,8 @@ pages for more information and options.
      <para>
       While both of these projects operate on a scale that your
       project will not (at least initially), their example is
      <para>
       While both of these projects operate on a scale that your
       project will not (at least initially), their example is

-      helpful. Debian's idea of a project who lead who can do
-      <emphasis>nothing</emphasis> but delegate can serve as a
+      helpful. Debian's idea of a project leader who can do
+      <emphasis>nothing</emphasis> but delegate serves as a

       caricature of how a project can involve and empower a huge
       number of developers and grow to a huge size.
      </para>
       caricature of how a project can involve and empower a huge
       number of developers and grow to a huge size.
      </para>

diff --git a/FreeSoftwareProjectManagementHOWTO.sgml b/FreeSoftwareProjectManagementHOWTO.sgml
index 74401a8f0f4dc0cc058b1e47cca123f70214a2cc..407322c2d92f0bbf515f6df7a17d2c3985f922e3 100644 (file)
--- a/FreeSoftwareProjectManagementHOWTO.sgml
+++ b/FreeSoftwareProjectManagementHOWTO.sgml
@@ -1380,8 +1380,8 @@ pages for more information and options.
      <para>
       While both of these projects operate on a scale that your
       project will not (at least initially), their example is
      <para>
       While both of these projects operate on a scale that your
       project will not (at least initially), their example is

-      helpful. Debian's idea of a project who lead who can do
-      <emphasis>nothing</emphasis> but delegate can serve as a
+      helpful. Debian's idea of a project leader who can do
+      <emphasis>nothing</emphasis> but delegate serves as a

       caricature of how a project can involve and empower a huge
       number of developers and grow to a huge size.
      </para>
       caricature of how a project can involve and empower a huge
       number of developers and grow to a huge size.
      </para>