Made a large number of mostly cosmetic fixes after a detailed
[selectricity-live] / app / views / site / index.rhtml
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 <h2>QuickVotes</h2>
 
-<p><em>QuickVotes</em> are unstructured votes, more like polls, without
-the voter verifiability, anonymity, and other more complex features of
-HyperChad. They are the quickest way to make a decision using a variety
-of preferential and non-preficial election methods, or to compare
-between methods.</p>
+<p><em>QuickVotes</em> are like polls: unstructured, non-anonymous and
+without the complex features of <em>HyperChad</em>. They are the
+quickest way to make a decision or to compare between voting
+methods.</p>
 
 <p><%= link_to "Create QuickVote.", :controller => 'quickvote', :action => 'create' %></p>
 

Benjamin Mako Hill || Want to submit a patch?