From: Benj. Mako Hill <mako@bork.hampshire.edu>
Date: Tue, 1 Mar 2005 16:18:30 +0000 (+0000)
Subject: final modifications
X-Git-Url: https://projects.mako.cc/source/unhappybirthday/commitdiff_plain/f033b18c9f4dd7ac718485e6d521eab792f9d236

final modifications
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diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index 91613a8..31a6070 100644
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@@ -158,11 +158,10 @@ New York, NY 10019-8016<br/></p>
 </blockquote>
 
 <p>If you're going send a message, here's a sample letter.  (Before
-sending such a letter, please be sure that the venue where you saw
-<cite>Happy Birthday</cite> performed is not ASCAP-licensed, as some
-restaurants, nightclubs, etc., do have blanket ASCAP catalogue licenses
-that might exempt patrons from copyright liability for singing during
-dinner.)  You'll want to modify yours to include correct details on the
+sending such a letter, you should know that some restaurants,
+nightclubs, etc., pay for blanket ASCAP catalogue licenses that might
+exempt patrons from copyright liability for singing during dinner.)
+You'll want to modify yours to include correct details on the
 infringement:</p>
 
 <blockquote>