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-<p>If you're going send a message, here's a sample letter.  (Before
-sending such a letter, please be sure that the venue where you saw
-<cite>Happy Birthday</cite> performed is not ASCAP-licensed, as some
-restaurants, nightclubs, etc., do have blanket ASCAP catalogue licenses
-that might exempt patrons from copyright liability for singing during
-dinner.)  You'll want to modify yours to include correct details on the
+<p>If you're going to send a message, here's a sample letter.  (Before
+sending such a letter, you should know that some restaurants,
+nightclubs, etc., pay for blanket ASCAP catalogue licenses that might
+exempt patrons from copyright liability for singing during dinner.)
+You'll want to modify yours to include correct details on the
 infringement:</p>
 
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