From: Benj. Mako Hill Date: Sat, 4 Jun 2005 00:08:54 +0000 (+0000) Subject: A diff fixing a ton of errors made by Andy King. The Diff follow X-Git-Url: https://projects.mako.cc/source/fspm_howto/commitdiff_plain/6bead429b2796e6cd7baa7d84e3ff2c5378b07ef?ds=sidebyside;hp=6bead429b2796e6cd7baa7d84e3ff2c5378b07ef A diff fixing a ton of errors made by Andy King. The Diff follow Author: mako Date: 2001/05/06 21:24:26 A diff fixing a ton of errors made by Andy King. The Diff follow: L84 - added "s" to "thing" L17 - do = does -- necessary? the "(s)" makes it a little confusing, but because it is primarily "author" (not plural), then "does" makes more sense. L186 - take = make L308 - how = who L387 - added comma between "work" and "while" L412 - perhaps add "If not, you should probably think about contributing to an existing free software application. It will accomplish the same goals that your own project would, and most likely make a better application than if there were two seperate ones." or something to that degree -- sort of like where you talk about forking later on; except that later on you're talking about how to deal with forks in the new project. This isn't really "forking," but more like "fracturing." You do mention that later, in "Deciding to proceed" but I can't decide which place is more appropriate. L484 - "useful gap" is awkward -- the gap isn't useful, the filling of it is. L488 - The = the L490 - how = who L504 - bellow = below - "searching of their databases" might want to be changed to "database searches of existing software" L526 - On the /. frontpage its stated as "News for Nerds. Stuff that matters." L528 - new = news L229 - an = a L230 - added comma between "here" and "so" - added "is" L464 - removed repetative "is" L540 - an = a L546 - rm'd "at" L596 - added comma between "management" and "but" L597 - be = get L599 - switched comma position around "but" L600 - added "s" to "remember" L663 - added "be" between "can" and "flexible" L736 - added "also" -- as it was before, it seems like the "but" is contradicting your previous statement when in fact you are re-inforcing it. L1152 - removed "a" between "in" and "the" L1184 - added "and" between "possible" and "are" L1198 - removed comma between "been" and "changed" L1271 - added "to" after "hesitate" L1310 - distributiosn = distributions L1328 - is the use of "problems" and then later "less problematic" redunant to you? L1348 - added "have" after "should" L2285 - large = largely ---