From: Benjamin Mako Hill <mako@atdot.cc>
Date: Fri, 28 Sep 2012 00:03:29 +0000 (-0400)
Subject: final read through before posting on website
X-Git-Url: https://projects.mako.cc/source/bmh-teaching_statement/commitdiff_plain/d5defaf23645ce338f91fb638073c8d53dae4009?hp=b3c8d114e5ab55438c49805f00eb7afbeac69e83

final read through before posting on website
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diff --git a/teaching_statement.tex b/teaching_statement.tex
index e21076f..074549a 100644
--- a/teaching_statement.tex
+++ b/teaching_statement.tex
@@ -140,9 +140,9 @@ Libre and Open Source Software in the Media Arts and Sciences program.
 Outside of organizing my own seminars, I have guest-taught in a number
 of seminars at MIT Sloan, the MIT Media Lab, the MIT Program on
 Comparative Media Studies, Harvard Law School, the Stanford Design
-School, and elsewhere. Since 2011, I have also coordinated a reading
-group on empirical research into online cooperation at the Berkman
-Center for Internet and Society at Harvard.
+School, and elsewhere. Since 2011, I have also coordinated a seminar
+on empirical research into online cooperation at the Berkman Center
+for Internet and Society at Harvard.
 
 \section{Mentoring}
 
@@ -179,7 +179,7 @@ Undergraduate ---
 \item \emph{Computer Mediated Communication}: An overview of practical
   and theoretical issues related to computer-mediated
   communication. The class focuses on analyses of practice but also
-  incorporates readings and lectures on theory, implementation, and
+  incorporates reading and lectures on theory, implementation, and
   design.
 \end{enumerate*}
 
@@ -195,11 +195,9 @@ Graduate ---
   systems.
 \item \emph{Social Computing}: The theory, analysis, and design of
   large scale, computer-mediated social systems. Final projects will
-  challenge students execute a study of an existing community or to
+  challenge students to execute a study of an existing community or to
   design or create a new system.
 \end{enumerate*}
 
-
-
 \end{document}