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 Although nearly all of my work has important implications for the
 design of socio-technical systems, I have structured much of my work
-around the evaluation of technological design changes. In several papers, I
-treat design changes as ``natural experiments'' that
+around the evaluation of technological design changes. In several
+papers, I treat design changes as ``natural experiments'' that
 exogenously change the ways that social structure is enacted in order
-to both build causal understanding of social phenomena from field data and to tighten the
-distance between theory and and design.
+to both build causal understanding of social phenomena from field data
+and to tighten the distance between theory and and design.
 
 For example, to evaluate the impact of status-based incentives and
 collaboration in Scratch, I use a regression discontinuity framework
